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小编:Eileen 140很多考生雅思口语万年5.5,有些同学断言口语考的分数低是因为模板背的多,但其实吧,不止是模板不模板的问题,还得看看模板里的句子是不是太LOW!
那些担心自己的口语模版和别人一样的童鞋(事实上是没错的),往往都是:自己写是通篇语法错误还chinglish!怎么办呢?还不是只能背背背?
下面以part 1的 一个问题为例来看看, 到底5分到7分+的例子有啥差别呢?
题目:dreamy house
考官:What's your dreamy house?
My dreamy house is a villa which (is located/situated) on the seaside. It should be big and comfortable...
5分……不要问我为什么,这样的模版考官都会背。
听说个真事儿,一个小伙伴考口语,背模版卡到一半,考官帮他把剩下的内容背完了……
I’ve been thinking about building a dreamy house, a villa by myself since I was young. It should beat the edge of tropical beaches surrounded by palm trees and blue oceans. In the front, there could be an open-air swimming pool, and at the backyard, some well-equipped barbecue facilities are also a requisite in case we throw a party.
6分大概长这样,落到5.5的这半分差距可能视你的流畅度、准确度和考官的心情而定。。。
6.5分的同学请在此加上一些细节,比如:
When it comes to the villa itself, my chief aim was to create somewhere that as environmentally-friendly as possible, so everything, from the furniture to the décor, is designed to be made of recycled woods and materials.
有没有发现秘诀?就是稍高级的短语和句式。
OK,如何就以上版本再加强呢?还是短语+句式。
7+ 的同学看过来:
It should be at the edge of some tropical beaches surrounded by palm trees and idyllic blue oceans.
In the front, there could be a big salt-water pool with retractable glass roof that I may enjoy the open-air experience even on cold days. Well-equipped barbecue facilities at the backyard are also a requisite in case we throw a party.
When it comes to the villa itself, my chief aim was to…
所以,有没有发现,如果能精准的补充一些句子细节,结合一点高级的词汇,你的口语答案就可以很棒呢!
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