雅思写作大作文高分技巧之审题
2014-07-31编辑: 来自: 环球雅思
目前为止环球教育已进行多次雅思模考,其中作文方面分数普遍不高。在大作文批改过程中,环球教育老师徐祎娇发现大量学生出现了严重偏题和部分偏题的情况。针对这一问题,环球教育老师从三个方面指导大家对雅思写作大作文审题,并且审好题,只有审好题才能赢得大作文高分。
1.起点
题干中的起点即为题目中的行为对象,所处位置为主语部分,不同的对象在年龄上,行为上等有较大差异。如2014年在1月,4月,6月同时针对换工作话题进行了考察。
20140111
Nowadays many young people in work force change their jobs or careers every few years.
• What do you think are the reasons for this?
• Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
20140405
An increasing number of people change their career and places of residence several times during their life. Is this a positive or negative development?
20140621
An increasing number of people change their career during their life
• What do you think are the causes?
• Do you think it is a positive or a negative trend?
在以上三道题目当中,虽然同时为换工作话题,4月5日与6月21日考察方向相同,为An increasing number of people越来越多的人,而作为对比,1月11日为young people年轻人,范围较后两道题较小,可以指出年轻的不易安定,对于未来的梦想等方面进行阐述。在大作文当中,比较易出现的任务方面的混淆项为children(13岁以下),teenage(13-19岁),people,adult,adolescent(青少年)等,不同年龄范围存在不同的写作指向。
在另一方面,同学们在写作当中同样存在被经验影响,写作起点误看的现象。如1月9日考察话题,
The best way for government to solve the traffic congestion problems in cities is to provide free transport 24 hours a day, 7 days a week. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
本题当中很多同学看到解决交通拥堵问题solve the traffic congestion,忘记了起点方面对于写作的限制。本题当中针对政府对于交通拥堵问题的解决方法进行了辩论,同学们如写出人们应该提高交通意识等写法为部分跑题。
(2) 终点
所谓终点,即为题目的话题范围,所处位置为宾语部分。一般情况下,终点会将题目话题范围进行进一步缩小。请参照下面两个题目
4月26日真题
With computers and Internet, people can study and work without traveling to school or company. Do the advantages outweigh its disadvantages?
对比题目:Nowadays people can use computers to talk, learn and communicate without leaving home. There is a danger that it will cause more isolation and a lack of communication among people. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
4月26日真题与对比题目的第一句相同,但是是否两道题目能够写完全相同的文章呢?答案肯定是否定了。在第二道题目当中,足不出户的使用电脑只是该题的背景,而本题的真正落脚点在于第二句关于电脑和communication的描述。所以在第二题当中,只能够写communication方面电脑的影响,电脑的其他影响如physical condition,information等不能涉及。
(3)敏感词
所谓“敏感词”即在题干当中,出现了叙述极为绝对的词。如1月25日题目,
20140125
The international community must act immediately to ensure that all countries reduce the consumption of fossil fuels (e.g. gas and oil). To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
本题当中同时出现了must, all, immediately三个敏感词,而在考试当中,很多同学选择agree,并进行论证减少化石燃料使用有利于保护环境,完全忽视敏感词。本题的正确写法应为,反驳敏感词,如反驳immediately,说明不能在不考虑任何情况下立刻减少使用。
环球教育老师希望大家在今后的雅思考试中能够找准文章的论点,审好题,拿到雅思写作大作文高分并取得理想分数。
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