孙琼 雅思写作真题

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Task 1

双饼图:1990年和2010年两年某广告公司毕业生的学历和专业所占比例的饼图分析。

Task 2

雅思写作真题:

The  science  tells  us  that  some  activities  tell  us  that  some  activities  are  good  for  us  and some are harmful to us, despite knowing that millions of people all over the world continue with unhealthy activities. What is your understanding of this? What do you think could be done to address this?

题目类型:原因分析+解决方案

话题类型:社会生活类话题

写作思路:本题可以从科技以及工作和生活的压力等方面进行拓展。以下段落示例供考生参阅。

第一段:背景介绍+引出下文:

段落展示:

Recent  years  have seen  the changes of  peoples  lifestyle  and people are  suggested  by  experts  to  promote fitness in daily life. However, there has arisen a phenomenon that most people take an indifferent attitude toward  this  proposal.  This  essay  is  mainly  concerned  with  analysing  the  causes  of  this  problem  and identifying solutions.

第二段:原因分析

段落展示:

The tendency of keeping unhealthy activities is attributed to three factors.

①科学技术的迅速发展使人们的生活变得更便捷,使得人们越来越懂得享受高品质的生活。例如,人们在休息时间更多的选择通过看电视,上网等现代化的娱乐方式度过,而不是参加健身。从而导致人们不愿意遵循健康的生活方式。

It is universally acknowledged that the rapid development of science and technology has made peoples life more  convenient  and  people  are  surrounded  by numerous  ways of  entertainment.  For  example,  people prefer  to  choose  modern forms of recreation to  relax  themselves,  such  as  watch  TV  or  surf  the  Internet, instead  of  participating  in  sports  activities. More  people  are  becoming  to  be  conscious  of  enjoying high-quality life. Thus, people are reluctant to follow a healthy lifestyle.

②现代社会的竞争压力加大,人们缺乏合理安排生活的时间和精力。例如,人们可能更加倾向于将时间利用在工作和学习上,而忽略提高身体健康。

Secondly, faced with high pressure from work and study, they ignore to promote health condition. In order to pursue success in career and education, people are inclined to make every effort to work and study. As a consequence, they lack time and energy to have a suitable arrangement of life.  

③社会没有较好地去提倡并为公众的健康的生活方式提供便捷,很多地方缺少健身设施的建立和维护。

Another point to note is that people have not been given enough access to lead a healthy lifestyle. Because of  the  limited  budgets,  there  are  not adequate  public  sports  facilities  for  people to do  physical  exercise, which cannot help them form a good workout routine.  

第三段:解决方案:

段落展示:

It is crucial to take measures to reshape peoples lifestyle.

①  公民本身应该提高健康生活的意识,并将这种观念传递给家人和朋友。

The public awareness of healthy lifestyle should be improved and they should convey this notion to their family members and friends. One practical method is that media should be encouraged to exert a positive influence on disseminating healthy lifestyle.  

②  科技的发展在方便人们生活的同时,还应该发明针对人体健康的项目。

In  addition  to  that,  the  development  of  science  and  technology  which  mainly  aims  at  making  life convenient, to some extent, should be focused on launching projects considering human health.

③  政府应当设立更多的健身设施,加大对健康生活方式的宣传。

The government should establish more fitness facilities and strengthen the publicity of healthy lifestyle.

第四段:  总结+建议:

总之,以上的几大因素正在慢慢影响人们的健康,为了改变这一现状,人们应该着重通过提高自身的身体素质和健康的生活方式保持健康,这样,公民个人的幸福生活和国家的可持续发展才能得以实现。

段落展示:

To  conclude,  peoples  weak  awareness  of  health  is  the  main  reason  behind  the  phenomenon.  To  address this problem successfully, the top priority is to raise peoples awareness of maintaining health.

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