孙琼 雅思写作真题

2013-12-30编辑: 来自:

Task 1

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Task 2

雅思写作真题:

In many countries,young people are leaving their homes in rural areas to study or work in cities.What do you think are the reasons for this?Do the advantages of this development outweigh its disadvantages?

题目类型:原因解释和利弊分析

话题类型:发展类话题

写作思路:本题可以套用教育,工作和社会生活类的话题素材进行展开。以下段落示例供考生参阅,其中利弊分析的段落展示可根据考生所持的观点自由拼接和组合,操作过程中注意关联词的使用。

第一段:话题引入+个人观点:

段落展示:

For young people from many countries,it has become a priority that they seek to receive education and build career in cities instead of implementing these at their homes.This essay will examine the reasons for this tendency and give analysis of its benefits and drawbacks.

第二段:原因分析:

段落展示:

This phenomenon may be contributed by mainly two reasons.

①教育资源的平等分配和公平竞争体制让年轻人拥有到城市学习的机会。

For one thing,the equal educational system provides youngsters with the same opportunity of acquiring knowledge and distributions of educational resources.As a result,these young people are inspired by the advanced teaching facilities and professional teaching methods at the schools in the cities.

②城市为年轻人提供了更多的工作机会,为他们的事业发展提供了更好的平台。

For another,there are more employment opportunities in the urban areas than in the countryside.Young people can access better career platforms,which can fulfill their pursuits of both wealth and self-realization.

第三段:分析好处:

段落展示:

①对于年轻人而言,他们可以获得更多的就业和发展的机会。

As for the young generation,they can obtain more job and promotion opportunities.Compared to the situation of employment in their homes,that in the cities can provide a more promising career prospect to the young people.In such a competitive society,young people can be stimulated to become more professional in certain fields and can achieve greater success.

②有利于年轻人更好的适应社会:可以获得优质的教育条件;年轻人的生活会变得更加便利;年轻人的社交圈会更加广;年轻人的独立性能够得到培养。

Living in cities can help young people easily adapt to the modern society.It is universally acknowledged that people can access better social resources in the cities.For example,they can offer more comfortable living condition,make daily life more convenient and enlarge their social circle.Therefore,they will be more socially adaptable in the future.

③从社会角度讲:可以实现社会资源的合理分配。

In terms of society,it can realize the appropriate distributions of social resources.Since the equal rights of resource utilization can be considered as a symbol of the modernization of the city,this trend will promote the social progress.

第四段:分析弊端:

段落展示:

However,there exist some disadvantages which may lead to unavoidable problems.

①削弱与家庭之间的联系。

It will weaken the family bond among family members.Separating from their families,the young people may suffer from some psychological problems such as loneliness and disorientation.Young students may find it difficult to depend on themselves which may further give rise to the unhealthy mental development.

②年轻人选择在城市定居和发展会使得乡村的人才流失,导致城乡的差距进一步拉大。

The gap between urban and rural areas will be further widened because with more young people flooding into the cities,the country will suffer great loss of talents who can make a contribution to the local places if they come back to their hometown after they graduate.

③城市会变得越来越拥挤,甚至出现买房和物价水平的急剧上涨。

Thirdly,there will be high density of population if more youngsters come to study or settle down in the city.

And it will even generate the sharp rise of high prices of housing and goods.

第五段:总结+建议:

总之,好处多于弊端。如果城乡之间能够实现教育和社会服务的较好平衡,年轻人在学成之后回到老家助力发展,从长远看这是一个较好的趋势。

段落展示:

To sum up,the benefits far outweigh the drawbacks considering the overwhelming educational and social benefits.As long as there is better balance of education and social services between the city and the countryside and young people are encouraged to shoulder the responsibility of constructing their homeland,it will become a positive trend in the long run.

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